Reading Between The Lines

by Sandra Busby
(East Sussex, England)

Reading Between The Lines

Reading Between The Lines

This is an attempt at a still life using ordinary graphite pencils. Rather that draw something like a bowl of fruit I decided that I wanted to draw something that told a story.

However, apparently it's about a girl who can't draw tissues - not quite what I had in mind! But there is something else not right about it that I can't put my finger on, which is why I have put it in my gallery - can anyone tell me where I have gone wrong? There is just something about it that I really don't like. Maybe it's the shading? I do like the glasses, and the shadow of them, and the pen, but I'm not convinced about the rest.

***Note from Kerry:
I don't know Sandra, all I know is .. I love it!! It does make a much more interesting still life than the normal fruit and such. I always enjoy your story, too, thank you.

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Reading Between The Lines

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Jun 20, 2009
Amazing!
by: Anonymous

A still life is supposed to be a drawing of some kind of life that can't move( That's what art teachers have told me.), but I hate that a type of drawing is so limited! I say that this is a still life even though it doesn't match the definition! This drawing is so life-like. How can you draw a tissue like that!? This drawing is truly amazing! I might have an idea: The wall might be what you don't like in this picture. Try moving the corner to the right until it's behind the tissue box, then the wall on the left could be lightened a little bit. I'm sure that this would really bring this drawing to life.

Feb 09, 2009
good job
by: Anonymous

tissues are not drawn..i must say but a good art is certainly drawn over there...its all about finishing the work and smiling at it..and i just love it..sandra..good job...especially the glasses on the black paper..that is amazing..

Oct 29, 2008
Great job
by: Sergio G.

Hi Sandra Busby, your drawing is wonderful, I love it! You did a fantastic job, your shading is really good, you should be proud of yourself. You did a terrific job, with so much honor I give you 5***** keep it up.

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